ext_99800 ([identity profile] kitoky.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] clippedpages on March 28th, 2012 at 11:57 pm
OMG OKAY SO I FINALLY SAT DOWN AND READ THIS AND OMMMMMMMMMMMG. In every fic of Johanna, I always expect her to be aggressive, and it felt a little odd at first because she isn't in this one - but then I realized that it's because she's one on one with Peeta, and Peeta's not the sort to get anyone riled up, so it makes sense for Johanna to be calmer.

That being said, you've pretty much done a fabulous job laying out a foundation for them as a functioning duo, platonic or romantic. Also, so, so glad you dealt with their recuperation after the war at least in a physical sense, because I really need that in canon.

DIS LINE THO: The Mockingjay blazed to ash and blew away, leaving the boy who forgot her to the feral girl no one wants to remember.

FEELINGS ALL OVER THE PLACE.
 
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